She Hates That She Hurts You
62The night was dark
she could hear a bark
the sky was crying
the candle light was dieing
she was sitting in a chair
in her hands was a bear
she wore a smile fake
just for the world's sake
she had hidden many secrets
she was burdened under many regrets
her heart was trodden
from inside she was broken
her world was turned upside down
but she did not frown
in that mysterious night
when the moon shone so bright
in her eyes flood of tears built
she spoke out with a guilt;
"she hates that she hurts you"
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thank you
I'm impressed! Very profound for your age, keep writing and cultivating your talent.
Thanks....glad that you read it :)
that was extremely good keep writing
thank you :)
it's amazing you are young but you can write a beautiful poem
Beautiful! Love it!
lovely poem for the lovely night..felt the pain..
glad that u read :)
A very good poem,you should write more.
Thank You, I am trying my best to come up with more but little occupied with my studies. :)
Beautiful and deep... You described the inner conflicts real well...!
Looking forward to more of your hubs..
Keep smiling
Take care :)
Thank You...looking forward to write more and more hubs. :)
I can relate. Love this poem, Umna.
I'm really glad you followed me or I wouldn't have found you..at least not yet, anyway. Thank you! (:
Voted UP, A and B
May peace be in your heart and soul...always,
Diana
Thanks a heap Diana. :)
Umna Safdar: Interesting, interesting poem, with effective shaping of mood and theme! The words seem to come straight from the heart---as a wish or as revelation? It could be either one. Voted up + interesting + beautiful
stessily, Thank you. :) Yes, the words did directly came from the heart.
Lgali 2 years ago
nice poem Thanks