To My Mother

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By Umna Safdar

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 When I first opened my eyes in this world

I felt myself in a mushy lap

I saw a charming face

With moist eyes and decent smile

Oh! that humble character was my mother

my whole life friend and soother

days marched on and I grew up

living under the shades of that tree

with hard stem to endure my mischiefs

with evergreen leaves to hug me

with strong roots to support me

for me she cares

for me she bears

but I only gave her tears

I know your love is priceless

and I am expressionless,speechless

thank you mother

for your lap like feather

for your warmth like cool weather

thank you mother

for taking so much bother

for me you live

but because of you I live...!

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Kushal Poddar 3 years ago

Very emotional. Beautiful.

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Umna Safdar Hub Author 3 years ago

Thank you... :)

EYES CHAMbERS 3 years ago

This is very nice. I liked it a lot, and think you should stick with this formula, this flow.

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Umna Safdar Hub Author 3 years ago

thank you eyes chambers......i am trying my best to keep it up

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gr8archer45 3 years ago

How much u love your mother is evident from this beautiful poem. Not every one is blessed with such a wonderful art of expression :) Keep it up!

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Umna Safdar Hub Author 3 years ago

Thanks

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sunesra 3 years ago

Nice one

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Umna Safdar Hub Author 3 years ago

thanks

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Mr Nice Level 1 Commenter 2 years ago

Hi Umna Safdar, This poem is very beautiful and I really like your thoughts about your mother.

Mother love is the fuel that enables a normal human being to do the impossible. By Marion C. Garretty

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Umna Safdar Hub Author 2 years ago

Thank you for reading my hub Mr.Nice!!!

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janni321 2 years ago

Mother is a gift of God. Sometimes when I lose hope, I take light of hope from my mother

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Umna Safdar Hub Author 2 years ago

for sure.....there isn't any best gift than mother!!! :)

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Umna Safdar Hub Author 2 years ago

for sure.....there isn't any best gift than mother!!! :)

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ladyonthemirror 2 years ago

I love it touchy

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haikutwinkle Level 2 Commenter 11 months ago

Beautiful poetry ;D

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Umna Safdar Hub Author 11 months ago

Thank You :)

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DTroth Level 3 Commenter 10 months ago

Beautifully penned. Beautifully felt. It saddens my heart.

Keep it up. (:

Diana

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Umna Safdar Hub Author 10 months ago

Thanks dear :)

jami l. pereira 10 months ago

beautiful tribute to your mom , voted up and awesome:)

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Umna Safdar Hub Author 10 months ago

Thank you. :)

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