To My Mother
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When I first opened my eyes in this world
I felt myself in a mushy lap
I saw a charming face
With moist eyes and decent smile
Oh! that humble character was my mother
my whole life friend and soother
days marched on and I grew up
living under the shades of that tree
with hard stem to endure my mischiefs
with evergreen leaves to hug me
with strong roots to support me
for me she cares
for me she bears
but I only gave her tears
I know your love is priceless
and I am expressionless,speechless
thank you mother
for your lap like feather
for your warmth like cool weather
thank you mother
for taking so much bother
for me you live
but because of you I live...!
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This is very nice. I liked it a lot, and think you should stick with this formula, this flow.
How much u love your mother is evident from this beautiful poem. Not every one is blessed with such a wonderful art of expression :) Keep it up!
Nice one
Hi Umna Safdar, This poem is very beautiful and I really like your thoughts about your mother.
Mother love is the fuel that enables a normal human being to do the impossible. By Marion C. Garretty
Mother is a gift of God. Sometimes when I lose hope, I take light of hope from my mother
I love it touchy
Beautiful poetry ;D
Beautifully penned. Beautifully felt. It saddens my heart.
Keep it up. (:
Diana
beautiful tribute to your mom , voted up and awesome:)
















Kushal Poddar 3 years ago
Very emotional. Beautiful.